I really liked this. I loved how he kept initiating contact ever so gently. The ending was classic. My only comment is regarding the sound; I missed a bit while in the train station and some other areas. Maybe it was me. but overall, it was done very well.
One thing, what was up with the pouring of the hot water upon her hand in the beginning? I think that's what I saw.
Anyway, keep up the good work.
I really liked this. I loved how he kept initiating contact ever so gently. The ending was classic. My only comment is regarding the sound; I missed a bit while in the train station and some other areas. Maybe it was me. but overall, it was done very well.
One thing, what was up with the pouring of the hot water upon her hand in the beginning? I think that's what I saw.
Anyway, keep up the good work.